“ohmygod! Stevie Rae! You scared the poo out of me!”
Marked – P.C.Cast and Kristin Cast
Young Adult
320 pages, Paperback
St. Martin’s Press
I’ve been reading more Young Adult lately and really enjoying it. Marked is the first in The House of Night series and has been out for awhile. It is quite a popular series, my local bookstore tells me it is the second best selling series after Twilight in their store. However, of the YA that I have read, Marked seems to be written to a more juvenile audience.
Zoey Redbird gets marked to become a vampyre (that is the cool way to spell it). After one is marked, you get a crescent moon on your forehead and you must go live at a special school, the School of Night, or you will die. Once you get there, it is not guaranteed you will live. For reasons unknown some teens get the bloody cough and drop dead before turning into a vampire – you never know when it is going to happen. There were several characters I was fervently wishing would get the bloody cough throughout this book – I wasn’t so lucky.
Zoey leaves her family (without many tears) to go start an entire new life totally on her own. Her first ten minutes at the school she accidentally sees hot sexy Erick Night about to receive oral sex from the queen bitch Aphrodite (you get to pick a new name when you enter school) but Erik pushes her away at the last minute when he sees Zoey. Now..I don’t know if this scene should have been in a YA book. There wasn’t much detail, Erik’s pants didn’t even get unzipped (damn!) and I really don’t even know what the point of the scene was except to tell us Erik and “Aphrohorny” are a couple but starting to break up. The part that really bothered me is that after this scene the author spent an entire paragraph preaching the wrongness of sex. She did this throughout the book when pot is being smoked, or beer is being drunk. Either put the more controversial scenes in there or don’t. I, nor teens need to be preached to.
Besides Erik, Zoey meets a group of friends that she bonds with instantly. There is Erin and Shaunee who have some freaky twin bond, although they are not related. There is Damien, the gay student, who unfortunately has to be friends with these people. He is the one guy I would hang out if I went to this school:) Well – Erik too..but we would be doing more than hanging out.
Then there is the roommate, Kenny Chesney obsessed, Stevie Rae. Oh Stevie Rae, why couldn’t you have picked a new name..and a new personality. Stevie Rae is the best friend who is always there to help, perky, always in your face. She wouldn’t last one day with a vampire in any other book.
Zoey stands out at school because her Mark is fully formed, something not usually seen in fledglings. No one seems to know the reason for this. Zoey also realizes after attending a ritual, that her powers far exceed any of her classmates.
Aphrodite is on track to become high priestess but Zoey realizes she is only out to please herself and would not make a very good unselfish high priestess. Zoey takes it upon herself to embrace her full powers and take the place of high priestess that is rightfully hers and take that bitch Aphrohorny down. I was hoping for a big fight at the end, but it was a big let down.
I know there are well, smart written YA books out there, I have read many of them. YA holds a special appeal to teens and adults alike because they can confront issues that teens face and be cleverly written to their adult audience. This book was neither. I have talked to some people that say book two is much better and I have seen lots of buzz and excitement over Tempted, the next in the series, so maybe there is something to this series. I don’t think I will stick around to find out.
I will leave you with a quote that sums up the book, Zoey to Stevie Rae:
Bloody cough, where are you!!
Rating: 2 Stars
This series includes:
Marked – May 1, 2007
Betrayed – October 2, 2007
Chosen – March 4, 2008
Untamed – September 23, 2008
Hunted – March 10, 2009
Tempted – October 27, 2009
Visit The House of Night Website.
Ana says
Humm. I have this book in my tbr and I was considering reading it for the YA month. But yours is not the first negative-ish review I have seen so I think I might pass, for now. Thanks
Blodeuedd says
Sounds cool, I too have been reading a lot of YA lately, but the preaching part, nope I sure don't need that either.
Taschima Cullen says
The book is not all that is cracked up to be, but it was quite enjoyable.
I'm one of the people who are waiting for Tempted, maybe it will get better, I hope :S
Patti says
I felt the same way about this series. It was okay. Not bad, but not great.
Leontine says
I don't think I'll ever be an avid reader of the YA genre, the only one I read so far is Melissa Marr's Wickedly Lovely. And from your review I get it that there is a condensending tone in there about sex and stuff. That would irrirate me too. Thanks for a wonderful review Mandi.
Michelle G says
Mandi,
My daughter loves this series. Me, not so much. I read the first 3 – but really had to struggle with them. Maybe I'm too old for this series. LOL Or maybe it's the writing style – I'm not sure which (though I like to think it's not because I'm too old).
Have a great day.
M
Monroe Dawson says
Oh darn…I love this series and I thought they got WAY better as they went! :o) Well not everythign is for everyone!
Mandi says
Ana – I can see the appeal it would have for a teenager. Just not for me.
Blodeuedd – I am really enjoying YA right now too.
Taschima – I will def read your Tempted review:)
Patti – Yep, ok sums it up:)
Leontine – I loved Wicked Lovely!!
Michelle – No way..not too old! :)
Monroe – I hear that from a lot of people that they get better as you go…
FictionGroupie says
I agree with Monroe. These definitely get better as they go along. I've really enjoyed the series, especially the love triangle/rectangle? The teenspeak is a little oh-my-god-i'm-so-sixteen over the top, but I learned to look past that.
Tracy says
I haven't read any of these but I have heard that they get better as they go along. But I wouldn't know from personal experience. :) I don't normally read YA unless I see a review of one that I just can't pass up. I think I'll pass this one up. :)
Good review!
Mandi says
FictionGroupie – Don't be telling me they get better!!! Then I will have to read them! sigh… ;)
Tracy – I've been trying to read more YA lately and for the most part they have been great. But I have been given lots of good rec's from fellow bloggers:)
Donna (Fantasy Dreamer) says
I've seen hot and cold reviews on this series. I know my stepdaughter loves it, so I guess the preachy part doesn't bother her so much. But then she is only 13 (she read these at her mom's). But from your review, it looks like it's not my kinda read. Thanks for the honest review!!!
Renee says
I tried this one a while back. While I didn't dislike it, it didn't really make enough of an impression on me to rush out to get book 2, either.
For YA vampire series, I'd rather read Richelle Mead's Vampire Academy series or Rachel Caine's Morganville Vampires series! :-)
Anonymous says
ARGH! I know exactly what you mean about this series. Zoe was the most annoying Mary-Sue and don't believe the rumors about the series improving – it stays sucky (pun intended!)
I agree that YA series are great though. I love Melissa Marr's 'Wicked Lovely' series, and Rachel Caine's 'Morganville Vampires'.
– Danielle
Teddyree says
I love the YA genre but I have seen mixed reviews on this one and the rest of the series. Great review, & thanks for the honesty but I'm gonna give this one a miss.
I'm with Renee, Richelle Mead's Vampire Academy series totally rocks!!
heidenkind says
Errr, that sounds pretty terrible. Especially with the quote you gave. =/
I read PC Cast's first two books and wasn't a big fan of her writing style; but I thought I might give this series a try since she co-wrote it with someone else and it's been getting such good buzz. Now I'm mentally kicking myself. Sigh. Well, I'll still give it a try.
Kay says
lol Every time I read the word "poopy" in this series I die a little inside.
I just finished no. 3 and am back to actively disliking them. Apparently the next two are the best, but I remain skeptical…
Naomi says
I've read the first three in the series, and have the fourth in my tbr pile, but the tone is so grating, I'm not sure I can be bothered with it. By the end of book 3, Zoey had become so annoying and Mary Sue-ish, it was an effort not to throw the book out the window.
Mandi says
Oh noes..the use of poopy is not good;)