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My Unfair Lady – Kathryne Kennedy

November 24, 2009 by Mandi 19 Comments

A wild west heiress, Summer Wine Lee knows that she’s not an acceptable bride for her fiance’s knickerbocker family. She grew up in an Arizona mining town, cares more for critters than people, carries a knife under her skirts, and, worst of all, she has a highly improper secret from her past. But she also has high hopes that a real English Duke can teach her how to be a lady…
Were it not for his father’s gambling debts, the Duke of Monchester would never have stooped to civilize Summer. But the more time he spends with her, and the more social scrapes he has to rescue her from, the more he finds it impossible to change her into a proper lady. How could he, when he’s falling in love with her just the way she is?




My Unfair Lady – Kathryne Kennedy
November 24, 2009
Historical Romance
384 pages, paperback
Sourcebooks
Book received from publisher

Summer is American that grew up in Tombstone Arizona, where she learned to shoot, and fight, but not schooled in the ways of a lady. Her father uprooted herself and her friend Maria to New York so he could continue investing in railroads and such. New York did not welcome her odd, uncivilized ways. All, except for Monte, who she is engaged too. Although Summer is very wealthy, Monte’s family does not accept that she is not a proper lady. So Summer Wine Lee has traveled to London and hired the Duke of Monchester, otherwise known as Byron to make her into a Lady so she can be presented to the Queen and go back to the states to marry Monte and make his family happy.

Byron is an impoverished Duke, he owns properly but they are quite ill maintained. He keeps his status and elite position in London by being Prince Albert’s eyes and ears in society. He collects embarrassing or funny stories about London’s elite and shares these stories with the prince to amuse him. Byron abhors American women who come to London title hunting. He is quick to offend and shock Summer and Maria. But Summer sees this as a golden opportunity – no sidestepping or manners to get in the way of shaping her up quickly to become a lady. His brash manner and shocking talk does nothing to embarrass her, much to the shock of Byron.

Byron is given an offer he can’t very well refuse. Summer offers him a hefty investment in the railroad she owns. Byron would be free of selling himself out to the prince, he would be able to live the life he wants, and not have to collect the silly stories that hurts others. Byron finds that Summer is not your everyday girl looking for a title. She carries a knife on herself, she is never one to be embarrassed – she is quite the match for Byron. The more time they spend together, the more the romance blooms.

I’ve gone back and forth in my head with My Unfair Lady. It is a cute premise for a book, but there were so many times I stopped reading because Summer or Byron did or thought something that just did not connect with me.

At the beginning of the book, Byron makes such a big deal about the amount of work he is going to have to do to get Summer ready but then two weeks are skipped and we don’t get to read any of his “preparations”. That is not to say she is a perfect lady by the time those two weeks are over, and I actually liked the fact that she stays true to who she is. However I think the story would have benefited by seeing how he transformed her those two weeks.

As the romance starts to develop between these two, I felt Summer lost her feelings for Monte way too easily. She travels all the way to London to be put at the grace of a Duke who humiliates people for a living, and I don’t think we saw her struggle with her feelings for Monte as she should have. After Byron and Summer give into temptation and he pleasures her and Byron wants to continue with intercourse, this conversation follows:

“I mean I can’t,” she took a deep breath, “make love to you.”
[…] “I’ve already made love to you, my American girl. What we do now is rather anti-climatic, don’t you think?”
Summer blinked. He looked so beautiful in gaslight. “Yes, no, I mean, I gave my word to another man. I have to uphold that vow until and unless he releases me.”
His hands started sliding down her arms. “Too late,” he murmured.
”No, it’s not. I haven’t betrayed him completely.”

And then she proceeds to pleasure him. I get that if she is falling in love with Byron, and Monte is all the way in the States, she just can’t call and say hey – it’s over between us. But at this point in the story, she still has intentions to marry Monte, and I’m sorry but what she did with Byron is betraying Monte. A few pages later, Summer does have a revelation and admits to herself she had betrayed Monte and then she decides to “stop these feelings she had for the duke. Thank goodness she hadn’t done anything that she couldn’t undo.” Which, as I take it, means since she didn’t have intercourse, she didn’t have to worry about a baby. But then soon after she does have sex with him and afterwards she thinks this:

“Stop it,” she whispered firmly to herself, “We’re finished.” Wasn’t that the whole point of their encounter today, to end this longing for him? Or did it go deeper than that?
Summer winced. It didn’t matter, anyway. She’d made a promise to another man, and it would take more than one steamy afternoon to break it.

The back and forth, wishy-washy feelings made Summer an unlikable heroine in my opinion. I did enjoy Byron – cold hearted, quick with his tongue, not necessarily a nice person all the time. Someone is out to murder him and Summer and Byron must deal with the danger of the unknown always lurking about. Summer’s friend, Maria, who is not shy at all about the way she acts is a cute addition to the story. If I could have reconciled myself to Summer, I would have enjoyed this book much more.

Rating: 2 1/2 stars

Recent Reviews:
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Kathryne Kennedy’s Website.

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  1. Leontine says

    November 24, 2009 at 10:08 am

    I enjoyed your review Mandi ;) It's obvious where your struggles come from with this book. I have on read KK with her Relics Of Merlin series and love her writingstyle and imagination in that series. The premise sounds good with this book; My Fair Lady but don't know what to make of Summer's actions as you highlighed them :S

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  2. Amy C says

    November 24, 2009 at 10:08 am

    Hi Mandi,
    I understand your reasons for not liking Summer. I had my own issues too with respect to her continued need to be a 'lady' for the sake of Monte, but I think because she feared breaking her vow to him it made it understandable for me, since her father was never around for her and losing her mother, those things in her life caused her to be a little thick headed :).
    I do love her writing!

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  3. Mandi says

    November 24, 2009 at 10:13 am

    The writing itself I had no problem with. I liked Byron and Maria. I understand her intentions for wanting to be a lady – to be able to belong to a family again. And I totally get that she fell for another man – but it was the – making out with Byron, and then going back to Monte, then back to Byron etc…that wore on me.

    This is the first I have read of her but her Merlin series sounds really good!

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  4. Amy C says

    November 24, 2009 at 10:36 am

    I hope you do give her Relics of Merlin series a try someday :). I like how she 'magicified' England! Very Cinderella like :).

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  5. Mandi says

    November 24, 2009 at 10:41 am

    I just looked them up – thanks for the rec!!

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  6. Marissa says

    November 24, 2009 at 10:44 am

    Hi Mandi,

    I had trouble with Summer as well, although it did not bother me so much as you. I think that Summer really does not know what she really wants until the end, she made vows and takes those seriously but she contradicts herself all the time. But I love her writing and I think her Relic of Merlin Series is quite unique and different, I love this series!

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  7. ErotRomReader says

    November 24, 2009 at 11:39 am

    Mmm, it seemed to have so much potential, with that sassy, tough heroine. It's sad that she turned out to be a flip-flopping, unlikable girl and that the story fell flat like that.
    I enjoyed your review though :)

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  8. Blodeuedd says

    November 24, 2009 at 12:15 pm

    Oh, now this one made me go hm, so a bit unsure. I always gets like that if it has the kind of heroine you described

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  9. Smokinhotbooks says

    November 24, 2009 at 12:43 pm

    Whoa. Mandi I never seen you give a book 2 1/2 stars before – from reading your points I get why. The wishy washy back and forth is not a good romance formula, that's so 1980's.

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  10. Katiebabs a.k.a KB says

    November 24, 2009 at 1:00 pm

    Is this the case of the virginal heroine giving the hero the almighty BJ?

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  11. SusiSunshine says

    November 24, 2009 at 1:14 pm

    I don't like these kind of heroines either. This "I won' cheat." and than doing it nonetheless is so ugh. Definitely not my thing!
    Thanks for the review!

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  12. SarahT says

    November 24, 2009 at 6:06 pm

    Ooh…sounds like one to avoid. Thanks for the review!

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  13. Mandi says

    November 24, 2009 at 6:09 pm

    Marissa – I didn't like how she called her sexual encounter with Byron a steamy afternoon and then off to Monte again. But I am def going to try her Merlin series. Many have rec'd it!

    ERr – Byron and Maria were good characters! Just couldn't get along with Summer

    Blodeuedd – Yeah – a big hmmmm :)

    Smokinhot – I told you I didn't have any 5-stars coming up ;)

    KB-oh yes – there is virginity and BJ's and lots of other sexin.

    Susi – Yes, that bothered me!

    Sarah – Thanks for stopping by :)

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  14. orannia says

    November 24, 2009 at 8:15 pm

    Hmmmm. Thank you Mandi. Not my cup of tea I think :)

    And I'm going to be the voice of dissent WRT the Relics of Merlin series. I thought the premise for the first one sounded good, but it just didn't work for me. But I guess there is always going to be books that do that :)

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  15. Donna [Fantasy Dreamer's Ramblings] says

    November 24, 2009 at 11:16 pm

    I would've felt the same way about Summer. I don't like it when either h/h can't make their mind about they are in love with. Makes you lose credibility for them.

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  16. Mandi says

    November 24, 2009 at 11:17 pm

    Orannia – Thanks for your side…hmm..maybe I will search the web for more reviews on them

    Donna – Yes – credibility is a good word to use!

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  17. heidenkind says

    November 25, 2009 at 1:10 am

    That's too bad. The premise of this book made it sound so fun! :(

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  18. kanishk says

    November 25, 2009 at 9:02 am

    I understand your reasons for not liking Summer. I had my own issues too with respect to her continued need to be a 'lady' for the sake of Monte Lingerie Access

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  19. orannia says

    November 25, 2009 at 8:23 pm

    I'm probably the only voice of dissent…sometimes it's the book and sometimes it's me. I'm not sure which is was with the first book in the Relics of Merlin series.

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